The Warrior...Part 1

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I like :)

Not sure if you knew this, but it's showing us as a very faint yellow text on my white background when I see this post on "Your Neighborhood" page. The rest of the post is fine, though.

Waiting for the rest of it...

This is very good. I am the better for reading it. I look forward to reading more. :)

I'm with Phisch about the text. I can read it when on your blog, but on my 'Neighborhood' page I had to select it to be able to see it. May want to change the font color. :)

Thanks for the heads-up, I was afraid of that...I fought with the formatting because I was copying from a Word .DOC...I think I've got it right now.
Finished roughing Part 3 at 2am on Friday...By my outline, I'm half finished. Will do some clean up on Part 2 and try to post on Tuesday or Wednesday. Sorry if I'm being a geek about it but I'm pretty excited about the direction that this is going. There's a very critical bit of dialogue that I planned to put in Part 3 and I'm really pleased with it.
[this is good]

Cool stuff, Tim - I'm getting a 'Christian Paolo Coelho' vibe, which is definitely no bad thing. I think that your real-life experience of seeing Colorado through Texan eyes gives you the ability to bring a freshness to writing about the great outdoors, as well as the perceptivity to locate the spiritual resonances that landscapes offer - milk that for all it's worth! (I'm saying that as someone who lives in a UK metropolis and who wants a bit of vicarious outdoorsmanship.)

Look forward to the next installment!

BTW - Dum dums? Intriguing...

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